I loved the 'Dean-voice' in this. And the tense thing was something I played with too in this challenge, and also I agree when reading mine the feel of present tense comes off as unpolished, but reading yours does not give me that feeling.
I also seem to think that present tense fits Dean much better than Sam. Since Dean as a character tends to live in the now, rather than yesterday or tomorrow.
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From the author of "Lies, and the Dreams in Between"
Date: 2010-09-06 01:22 am (UTC)I also seem to think that present tense fits Dean much better than Sam. Since Dean as a character tends to live in the now, rather than yesterday or tomorrow.