Making Jess one would have added another 30k to weave that in *wryly* Which, maybe not a bad thing from a story perspective, I could have done the whole thing where maybe she had already turned all the way and then you get that whole drama angle of what side is Sam going to come down on a la Madison and that type of deal -- but this was every last minute of time I had to devote to this *grins* As you can see it went up a little fast already, I'm still picking out typos *winces* Thanks for that one! I'll fix it as soon as LJ stops telling me I have load errors when I try...

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