I finally finished reading (not the speediest reader)! And I loved it! I had not intended on commenting tonight, because it is already waaaay past my bedtime, but I couldn't stop.

First, I have a hard time, sometimes, with longer stories, because I forget all the best parts (that I want to mention) as I go along. I regret that, even though I really prefer reading an entire story compared to a WIP. So I have no good excuse!

The suspense was excellent. Well developed, slow and steady. No choppiness or clumsiness. It all flowed seamlessly. I anticipated every new development eagerly.

I loved the feel of Sam. I would say he had an "other-worldliness" feel, but I think I prefer to think of it as an "other-sentient" charm..

I cherished their bond as much as I cherished the way they had to explain the unique characteristics of their individual worlds to each other.

The case was an ingenious creation. I loved it. And along the lines of the creators of "Supernatural," humans are often the worst monsters of all, aren't they? :)

The effect the "curse" had on Sam was interesting, but the effect it had on Dean might just have been life-altering. At least I hope so. Even though he had found his life's mate, he was still kind of lost, wasn't he?

I almost forgot...I am in the medical profession, so sometimes I struggle with injuries or illnesses in fiction. But honestly, the way Dean felt every reverberation in his broken bone? Oh yes! That rang so true! I could really appreciate the feel of his injuries. Not that I wanted him wounded, just that I could imagine him impaired in an impending battle. Great job!

Okay, I guess I really love these guys! Thanks so much for writing more. It is a great story and you did a wonderful job with it! :)

Thanks for taking me on such a wonderful, captivating ride! :)