I'm glad you enjoyed the finished product! I was worried about a few passages, and I still think some parts go to fast - but I don't really like weighing things down with filler, you know? And the end result seems to read pretty well *grins* I think you are the _only_ person who have ever mentioned the quotes! ~Thank You~ I was thinking of using the Calvin quote to open the sequel with, but it was too hard to resist. Thanks you so much for the help and the feedback, and for commenting! *hugs*
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Date: 2010-11-05 12:05 am (UTC)