Date: 2010-11-05 12:01 am (UTC)
The first read-thru I did was pretty awesome.

I didn't see any issues with Sam. He's used to living his wild life sure. But, just cause humans can walk and talk doesn't make us that much more communicative and understanding in the ways of love and relationships. Actually, it would probably be better if we didn't talk so much, words tend to get in the way and hurt sometimes.

If I had any concrit to offer, it would be that Bobby's characterization didn't seem all that Bobby-ish. He just didn't have enough ...hutspah, wasn't quite the grumpy-old man that the show portrays him as with his backwoods one-liners and such. But that is seriously a minor thing in the grand scheme. I was going to tell you but I never had the chance.

It was still a great read and really refreshing take on the Werewolf idea!

Loved it!

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